Can you help me roast my landing page?

[kingback]

Hey /r/indiehackers, I'm building a newsletter focused around optimistic news in technology and science; whether that's the latest breakthrough in new dog longevity treatments, new space discoveries, nanotechnology curing certain cancers, etc.

I felt like the world is too full of the Crisis News Networks and Fabricated Or eXaggerated networks and I want to push against that with my tiny newsletter.

Please let me know how you feel about the landing page.

Is it too vague?
Does the colour schemes work?
What do you like about it?
Does the tagline convey what the newsletter is about?
Appreciate it!

https://www.earlybirdspecial.club/

 

[clear2learnfaith]

@kingback Took some time to look over your landing page

Here are some feedback I can provide:

1. Wordy headers.
2. Simple.
3. lack of info.

Overall, I think you are in a great direction. From my experience working with early stage startups like yours, I find these typically to generate better traction