@xneedhelp Glad you found it valuable! Average watch time will be a super important metric that tells you a lot about why your content is not pushed to more people. So make sure to look at that and include hooks in the beginning.
My feedback:
- Right now it is a bit unclear why I should keep watching and what the purpose of the videos is. What value or entertainment are you giving me as a viewer?
- Who are you targeting? Make sure the viewers are hooked in the first seconds - why should they watch your clip? Maybe add a cliffhanger.
- There is no face or action. TikTok is all about fast pace and entertainment. Try making a sketch of someone drinking the juice, everybody stopping and watching, wanting to try the delicious drink being the coolest person on the beach, or whatever.
Hope that was helpful and best of luck!